Looks like a good first attempt. When I do Bulino work, since I'm not a portrait artist, actually not an artist at all. I like to use a transfer to get the sizes and positions of the eyes ,nose and other features just right. It's done right when you don't even notice the proportions. Different sizes of dots or lines ,heavy or light pressure really helps with shading too.
I do need to work on different textures. This was just a quick experiment and wasn't really planned out at all. If I were doing a "keeper" I would definitely be more careful with my layout. Thank you for the feedback!