Critique Request Holt script

KyleMontoya

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Something feels off about this, can it be fixed or should I scrap it and start over.
 

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AllenClapp

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IF I understand your red lines correctly, it looks like you may be wanting to make the small letters in the name look three dimensional. If so, that maylook odd next to a capital H that is clearly a flat two-dimensional letter, unless you also add a little to the H to make it look more three dimensional.
 

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I like the "old", but the "H" over powers the lower case letters. Maybe make the "H" a little less bold and add some curvature like the lower case letters.
 

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You're combining an old english upper case H with lower case script olt. Lower case old english is easier to engrave than script and goes better with the H. Keep the font uniform.

Allan
 

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i simply don't like the combination you show here. i'd say start over
 

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