Critique Request Another dime size engraving.

[Jim Sackett]

Started over on this set up new flat from a 50 round with slight rounding on heel. Used square 90 for hairlines. Comments welcome.

Jim

 

[monk]

see. practice does make you get better ! i told you so !

 

[dhall]

Hi Jim,

Almost need a shoe horn to get "Christmas" to fit in that space. You might think about a curved or arced base line to let the word breathe a bit. Or perhaps a slightly smaller size for the text and drop the date down a touch. Definitely better looking than the previous attempt - I'm with Monk!

Keep cutting,
Doug

 

[Jim Sackett]

Thanks Guys

Jim