Critique Request some drawing exercises

[Caty Blom]

Hi all, I want you guys to show what exercises of recent times. Criticism or educational instructions are very welcome, before I will engrave this. The lines in the drawing of the necklace are deepened by a waltz, but you can make the necklace without that floor. Greetings Caty.

 

[Arnaud Van Tilburgh]

Caty, what is your favorite one?

arnaud

 

[Caty Blom]

The third one with the flowers Arnaud and afther that no4 and no5 and no2 and last but not least no 1, greetings Caty

 

[Paul Russell]

Hi Caty, nice designs, and good job on your drawing too !!
Cheers, Paul.

 

[monk]

2nd. from the top is going to win !

 

[dlilazteca]

2nd. from the top is going to win !

I agree or the bottom one, those show symmetry, more pleasing to the eye. Thanks for sharing.

Carlos De La O III

 

[Willem Parel]

The second and the third are my favorites, very nice drawings Caty!

 

[take-down]

Loverly work I like them all, but the one that really makes me look twice is No 4. It's a little out of the square looking for adventure I like that
But hey I am a complete novice and as yet havn't even completed a project apart from lots of practice plates
Cheers Graham

 

[rayf24]

[Cathy I like 1 2 6 Jusy some thing I spotted the center of 2 put in 6 here is a very quick cut paste needs smoothing out but just an what I see and maybe a little more leaf or scroll to kill the negative area


Ray

 

[Arnaud Van Tilburgh]

Caty, as this is about jewelery design, I can give you a good advice.
One basic rule is: roundness. Over 90% of the people prefer round shapes more than sharp shapes.
Now the designs you have draw, are meant for ladies I suppose. In general woman don't like the shapes "triangle", "marquise" etc.

That is why I asked you "what is your favorite one?" The second and the one with the flowers have the most round form and so does the second one. But still the leave structure on the one with the flowers have leaves like thistles (distels), and sure that ain't women friendly.
Just like thorns, only a few have them as a tattoo.
So if you would like to sell one of these necklaces, go for the 90% of people who prefer soft round forms.

arnaud

 

[Caty Blom]

Hi Arnaud, you surprised me with your answer, I myself am totally unaware of this, and just because I'm a woman surprised me so that I have to sign forms themselves. It should therefore also apply to myself or you should only have the outer form and not on the content of the outline. When it comes to the outline I can understand, but in this case, the necklaces that flat chest come down and therefore not really incentives will provide. But you have me now curious and will agree testing among my female friends, and will certainly take into account going, greetings Caty.
Everybody thanks for the likes.