4 letter monos are always hard to lay out. i think if you used some heavier angle cuts in places it would keep the design from looking stringy, add a little boldness, and make it easier to read. you have put in a lot of work and it's looking very good
Looking good Jim. The S and the H are really good. I can read those easily. I think you did great on the design. The outside oval looks a little thin to me. But I know next to nothing about monograms.