Nice carving! I don't think you need critique as you obviously have good carving skills and any criticism would be more a matter of taste and style. That's the nice thing about hobo nickels, they give the carver a lot of freedom. Thanks for sharing.
No great carving skills, just patience. I have some decent gear, but this coin took me a month...I have carved 8 coins in 8 months...the more I look at it the more I see my faults...mostly in the neck...too straight and contrived...background texture good, border work decent...Bit everything below the bottom hair and jawline is our
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Kind of like the high collar and stiff neck myself. We are our own worst critics. I know for myself, I may have done one engraving I was really satisfied with in the last two years. I did pick up some nickels a couple of days ago and this one inspires me to start carving my first! Very nice work.