Finished Weatherby Orion

[Leland Davis]

Finished Weatherby Orion. Feel free to critique my work your not going to offend me. I want to know what to work on to make it better.
Thanks, Leland

 

[JMiller]

Hi Leland, one thing that stands out to me on your design and you may have intended it to be that way, but I think your border would look better with a border or outlined to separate the edges and frame your scroll & game scene.
I’m a compulsive doodler and when I have spare minutes that’s what I do, here are a few doodles I have done at work with some borders.

 

[Leland Davis]

J do you mean another line inside the border so negative space separates the border from the scene and scrolls? I did intend to do it this way but I like your idea.
Thanks

 

[JMiller]

Yes, negative space on both sides of the border leaf design….