Critique Request Moki pliant thuja

[Matthew Evans]

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[AllenClapp]

Nice, clean, and easy on the eyes. I like the extra line going from the starting bud up under the first leaf. It helps to give depth. However, that is the only place that I see that treatment. I wonder if it would be helpful to have it at least one other place in the design. Not sure where that would be, though. Also, it looks like a lot of bacground work to do, but the balance is pleasing as it is--just more work. I notice that the starting bud looks like the ending tendril on the three scrolls. Would it help to tighten up the starting scroll, and maybe start a small inside leaf coming out of it to help differentiate the starting bud from the ending scroll tendrils? Having said all of that, it is such a nice flowing design that I am not sure it is worth the trouble to change anything. The only reason that I am saying anything is that I liked the design so much that I spent time examining how you interrelated the parts and got invested in it.

 

[Matthew Evans]

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[Matthew Evans]

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[monk]

looks rather nice to my eye

 

[Matthew Evans]

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[monk]

a very nice start

 

[JJ Roberts]

Keep up the good work Matt. J.J.

 

[Leland Davis]

Looking good Matthew. Look forward to seeing it shaded

 

[Matthew Evans]

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