Todays Doodle for Critique

[Zito]

Help, please. Lol Be aggressive.i know im still drawing way too hard.

 

[ByrnBucks]

Zito, very elegant leaves quite lovely. Maybe a few less shade lines… a tiny bit of white space next to the leaf line, and not completely filled in on some. Have a good one

 

[Zito]

Zito, very elegant leaves quite lovely. Maybe a few less shade lines… a tiny bit of white space next to the leaf line, and not completely filled in on some. Have a good one

Thank you thank you!!!! May I ask what is the leaf line? My apologies if that’s a crazy question. Thank you again for the response… exactly what I’m looking for.