Critique Request Getting Started

[rockymoundarms]

Started cutting western bright cut and got bored. I like English Scroll. My attempt at combining the two. The bright cuts need to extend I think. What else is wrong? This is cut in aluminum.

 

[monk]

your drawing for this was good imo. the cutting is consistent. i dislike the way in which the bright cuts terminate. imho, a bit more attention to initial drawing would make this a bit less "static". a bit more dynamic in appearance. time will see improvement.

 

[Brant]

Look at some of Wes Griffin”s video, he does a modified Western Bright ithat is easy,fast and sparkles!!

 

[rockymoundarms]

Thanks for the replies.

 

[JJ Roberts]

Rocky,I believe your off to a good start keep it up. J.J.