I am just finishing this one. The client wanted something in the general flavor of one of the traditional Parker patterns. For this reason the shading is not as refined as it might be and the pattern not as involved. Many of the patterns for older guns were a little coarse and some poorly designed. This was fun because of the unusual scene on the bottom. I'm at the stage where I've set it aside for a few days so I can gander with fresh eyes. At this point I wouldn't know whether anything I do would help or hurt. If anything jumps out at you that needs so modifying sound off.